Timeline

I liked the composition and the way Ward Shelley did the time line, the scale is focused on too, some objects are exaggerated compared to others and some are smaller. Part of her time line are overlapping too.

My version influenced by the compostion and scale of his work for timelines.

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Reflection/Evaluation 

This week i felt i learnt a lot in such little time, the amount of time line there were was fascination, each type or style had their own way of expressing emotions, time etc. We interpret it in many different ways.   Having made a tower, the weak points were that people didn't really understood it until i explained it to them, but this had an interesting view, some people viewed my time line in a completely different way to mine - it was fascinating hearing a different view on your product. 

The feedback i had was to improve on the aesthetic bit more, it didn't look as well finished as it could be. It was rather rough because of the time i had and the amount i had to do, but it was also a style i wanted to show, My time line was influenced by posted notes, i liked the fact of how old things get buried and are forgotten as i had a rather unpleasant childhood, i liked to forget this and overlap and cover these old times with new memories. I think the stable and rigidity can be improved, i would have used wood so the product will be rigid and can have a nice finish. Overall i think my time line was rather different to everybody else due to the architectural style, i enjoyed the process very much.